Helping Authors Out: Tips on Writing Reviews

Once an author sends the work out into the world for others to read, purchase, and hopefully enjoy, there beloved story is in many ways at the mercy of the cold, cruel world out there.

To many authors, the worst thing that can happen is that nobody reads their stories. Some might say a bad review is the worst thing that can happen. I’d argue at least someone read your story and it evoked enough of an emotional response the reader felt compelled to write and post a review.

Why are reviews so important? I can promise you its not so the author gets their ego stroked. Nothing stings like a critical review of your defenseless baby and the positive ones, well, from the author’s perspective reviews should all be positive ones right?

Reviews are important because they are social proof!

Proof that somebody else:

  • invested time in reading the story.
  • enjoyed the story.
  • paid money for the book.

Reviews are the only factor in a potential reader’s decision to buy a book or borrow it on KU, but they are important and authors crave reviews – even if they may not want to read them.

In the back of nearly every ebook you’ll find a request to leave a positive and honest review on a variety of platforms:

  • Amazon (or your book retailer of choice)
  • BookBub
  • GoodReads

Periodically, I get comments from readers who tell me they loved one of my stories. I love these emails. The reader took the time to dig up my email address and send me a nice note. I always send a thank you and ask as politely as I know how if the reader would post a positive review.

Then comes the response. The reader informs me politely, they don’t know what to put in a review and that’s why they don’t leave reviews.

If you talk to even just a handful of authors, they will all tell a similar story.

If you’ve ever felt this way as a reader, you loved, or even just liked, a book and would write a review if you had a few pointers on how to do so, here are some suggestions and tips on how to leave a good (meaning a well constructed) review.

Use Keywords:

Keywords are terms used to help search engines find things. Use two or three key words, if possible in your review. For example, if writing a wonderful 5-star review of The Predator and The Prey, you would want to work in keywords like:

  • crime fiction
  • crime noir
  • future crime thriller
  • science fiction crime thriller

These descriptive terms help the reader know the genre or type of story they would be reading if they purchase or borrow the book.

Review Length:

Amazon, the king of ebook retailers, HATES short reviews. In fact, it is very suspicious of them and will often remove them, sometimes even penalizing the author and/or the publisher in some way. Amazon’s thinking is these are false reviews. One thing Amazon takes dead serious is reviews.

Everyone who takes the time to write and post a review wants the review to be approved and posted. I know I do.

Reviews need to be long enough to be helpful but not too long!

Reviews should be between 100 to 450 words in length. 100 words is long enough to make Amazon happy AND give a potential reader enough information for the review to be helpful. Anything over 450 words and the reader of the review might get bored or the reviewer might reveal too much of the plot.

Note: In the case of non-fiction, especially technical works, longer reviews are acceptable.

Don’t include spoilers!

If for some reason you, as the reviewer feel absolutely compelled to include a spoiler and give away the ending or a key plot twist, POST A SPOILER WARNING! This way, the reader of the review can decide whether or not to continue.

Some hints to get started:

  • State what you liked about the book! (Sully is a cool dude!)
  • What are some comparable books you’ve read.
  • If you were given a copy of the book in the form of an ARC – Advanced Reading Copy

A word about Advanced Reading Copies – ARCs:
It is NOT okay to pay individuals for reviews. Amazon in particular and other ebook/book retailers frown on this practice.

It is OKAY to give readers copy of books for free prior to the book going on sale so the reader can write a review. Stating this makes Amazon in particular happy as well as the other retailers.

Besides, stating you got an ARC means you were cool enough for an author to give you a copy to read and review!

A final thought.

I love five-star reviews! I need them to sell my books. But I will settle for an honest review – so long as it’s fair.

One of my non-fiction books got a one-star review early in its retail life and it absolutely killed the sales momentum. It took me two months to get Amazon to remove it.

The book was on strategy and tactics for basketball coaches. In a previous life I was a very successful varsity basketball coach, winning nearly 500 games in 22 season, averaging 22 wins a year.

The author of the one-star review was a coach who had never beaten me in the years we were in the same district. The review was nothing more than sour grapes on his part and was patently untrue and unfair.

When posting a review with 1 or 2 stars, especially if the book has just been launched and doesn’t have many reviews, you will kill any momentum the book has.

So think about it before you hit submit. Is the book truly so bad you need to destroy any chance the author has of success? If the answer is yes, go ahead and hit submit.

Just be certain its a fair review.

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Check Out My Interview With Author Dan Petrosini

I recently had the opportunity to interview author Dan Petrosini, author of the Luca Mystery series! To read the entire interview, you can click here to go to the permanently posted interview or wait and read it in the July 14th issue of The Inspector’s Report.

If you’re a fan of crime noir, mysteries, or thrillers, you’ll want to take the time to read the interview.

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Which Character is Your Favorite? Who Do You Love To Hate?

As I consider ideas for Sully #8 and Sully #9 I find myself interested in learning what the readers of the Sullivan stories think about the characters. There is only one way to find out and that’s to ask those who read the stories.

Thus, the need for a poll to get feedback on what readers think about the characters who fill the Sully ‘verse.

To participate in the poll, please click here.

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Friends In Low Places Audiobook Version Is Available Now

Sort of. I’m used to hitting the button on KDP’s Author Dashboard and in 72 hours Amazon is ready to sell your latest Kindle or paperback.

The same isn’t true with Audiobook distribution. It can take up to 45 days for all 43 audiobook retailers to have a new title listed and for sale.

How do you promote the launch of a title when it’s spread out over 45 days and guess who is usually the last retailer to go live with your new audiobook? Amazon.

As I type Friends in Low Places – Audiobook edition, is available from:

Kobo

Chirp

Google Play

Audiobooks.com

Friends In Low Places Audiobook
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Coming Soon! More Lessons Learned in the process!

In 2008 I published my first book. It was a non-fiction title and to my surprise it sold well. Well enough to become an Amazon Best Seller. My third non-fiction book not only became another Amazon Best Seller, it generated enough revenue to pay for a new roof, replacement of our HVAC system, and some fun money left over. All of which was from one month’s sales!

Years later, I decided to try my hand at the fiction game. I’d had a brief flirtation with success in non-fiction and learned a tremendous amount about the publishing game, both traditional and indie. It had been a steep learning curve made bearable by the fact I didn’t need to master my knowledge of my subject matter.

Surely the learning curve to sell fiction wouldn’t be that difficult?

Like most things in my life, the instant I make a grand assumption I set my self up for a humiliating reality check. The learning curve has been steeper, more challenging, and financially more uncertain. I knew I would at earn back at least my costs with each of my 20 non-fiction titles.

While I learned the fiction game, my non-fiction revenue could underwrite my new enterprise. At the same time my youngest daughter was still a competitive gymnast, would soon be a freshman in college, and a host of other ongoing expenses.

While I misjudged the degree of the challenge I faced, and I’m glad I had some success under my belt writing non-fiction first or I would have quit long ago, I’m glad I took the leap.

Recently, I committed myself to yet another learning curve in the publishing world. My first audiobook will be available soon!

Friends In Low Places Audiobook

I selected to have the first episode of the Capital City Characters series of novellas, Friends in Low Places, as my first venture into audiobooks.

There is considerable expense for an indie author to have a print work, paper of digital, converted into an audiobook. Like it or not, being an author means you are an entrepreneur as well and there is financial risk in everything you do.

Friends in Low Places was a good choice. It is only 18 chapters long, tells the back story of a popular secondary character in my Sullivan thriller series, and is the first in a series. If sales warrant it, I plan to have Dolls, Dames, and Danger converted next with each title eventually becoming available as an audiobook.

Audiobooks are growing in market share. One of the things I learned in my venture into non-fiction was being an early adopter of converting my titles to ebooks meant I had little competition in my niche. I estimate that fact alone is why I have the roof over my head as I type.

The revenue generated from audiobook sales is earmarked to pay for the next title in line to be converted. My goal is to have every title in my backlist made available in audiobook form and if possible, for each new release to be available in digital, audio, and print versions upon release.

If you enjoy my stories and you like audiobooks, please support the effort. Friends in Low Places is reasonable priced! It will sell for $5.95 upon release.

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Incident on Damascus II Available on June 23rd!

Episode V: Incident on Damascus II of the Capital City Characters series will be available on Amazon and Amazon Kindle Unlimited on June 23rd, 2020.

Episode V tells the back story of Father Nathan starting with his life as a soldier of fortune and ending with his arrival on Beta Prime in Capital City.

Capitial City Character Series - Episode V
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Availability of The next Two Episodes of Capital City Characters

Episodes III and IV of the Capital City Characters series of novellas are now available to ordered or pre-ordered from Amazon. Episode III: The Young Detective tells the backstory of Sully’s male protege, Detective Josephson at the same time he pursues his first serial killer.

The Young Detective

Episode IV: The Girl Who Wasn’t There tells the long awaited story of the origins of the mysterious Sarah and how her path came to cross that of Inspector Sullivan. The Girl Who Wasn’t There is the first of author K.C. Sivils stories to be illustrated. Artist Sadie Rose du Vigneaud helped bring Sarah’s story to life.

The Girl Who Wasn't There

Episode V: Incident on Damascus II will be released on Amazon on June 23rd, 2020 and is available now for pre-order. Episode V examines the life of Father Nathan during his days as a mercenary.

Episode V: Incident on Damascus II
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Sarah Says – Enter Her Contest! Win a Signed Copy of The Girl Who Wasn’t There!

Sarah Says Enter One Contest or Two!

The Big Contest!

Grand Prize:
  Only one to be awarded.

  • Signed paperback copy of The Girl Who Wasn’t There. Singed by both the author and illustrator.
  • Signed 11×17 print of an illustration from The Girl Who Wasn’t There by the illustrator Sadie du Vigneaud.
  • Signed paperback copy of Incident on Damascus II.

2nd Place: Two prizes to be awarded.

  • Signed paperback copy of The Girl Who Wasn’t There. Signed by both the author and illustrator.
  • Signed 11×17 print of an illustration from The Girl Who Wasn’t There by the illustrator Sadie du Vigneaud.

Third Place: Three prizes to be awarded.

  • Signed 11×17 print of an illustration from The Girl Who Wasn’t There by the illustrator Sadie du Vigneaud.

Just for entering:  It’s a surprise but you’ll like it!

Deadline for entering: June 19th, 2020

Winners Announced: June 23rd, 2020

How to Enter:

  • Take a photo of you holding up either the cover of a paperback copy of ANY of the Thomas Sullivan Thriller Universe series of books (15 total to choose from) or the digital cover displayed on your ereader device.
  • Include a short description, no more than two or three sentences why you enjoyed that particular story.
  • Attach the photo to an email, which must include the description of why you enjoyed the story, and email it to me by DEADLINE!
  • Send the e-mail to SciFiThriller@kcsivils.com with Big Contest in the subject line.
  • Only entrants who comply with all of the requirements will be considered for a prize.

Important Notice: All entries become property of The Inspector’s Report and may be used for promotional purposes.

The Little Contest

Grand Prize: It’s a surprise but I think you’ll like it!

How to Enter:

  • It’s easy! Follow me on BookBub! Here’s how:
  • Click Here
  • Take a screen shot of the post for K.C. Sivils
  • Click on Follow
  • Email that screen shot to me at SciFiThriller@kcsivils.com
  • Put Little Contest in the subject line
Follow K.C. Sivils on BookBub

Deadline for entering: June 19th, 2020

Winner Announced: June 23rd, 2020

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Interview With Renee Pawlish – Creator of the Reed Ferguson Series

What prompted you to take the plunge and become a published author?

That’s a loaded question. I’ve written things since I was in elementary school, and after grad school I penned my first novel (not a very good one). I wrote the first two Reed Ferguson novels, and then I took a turn into mystery-horror and wrote Nephilim: Genesis of Evil. At that point, a friend encouraged me to publish it, and I’ve never looked back.

Anyone who had read your Reed Ferguson series and the Dewey Webb series knows you have a deep appreciate for all things crime noir. Where did this interest come from?

I’ve always loved reading mysteries, including the classics. I also enjoy old movies. I kind of fell into the noir aspect with the first Reed Ferguson mystery, and I liked the idea of Reed enjoying film noir. I had seen some of the classic noir movies, and as I wrote more Reed novels, I watched more film noir movies and studied the genre. It’s been a lot of fun.

Your Reed Ferguson series is a lot of fun. It’s a good mix of modern crime, crime noir references, and humor. How did you arrive at the idea for this series and its unique mix of elements?

That’s a nice compliment, thank you. As a reader, I’ve enjoyed humorous mysteries, and I’ve been told I have a good sense of humor. It was natural to bring humor into the novels, and I wanted Reed to have something unique about him, and that’s where the film noir aspect came in. It’s been a treat to intertwine film noir movies into each book. I’ve had a lot of fun punning film noir movie titles and then figuring out ways to have the movies play into each book plot.

The Dewey Webb series is much more of a traditional crime noir set of stories. What inspired you to create this series after the success of your Reed Ferguson stories?

Dewey Webb first appeared in Back Story, the tenth novel in the Reed Ferguson series. I’d had an idea bobbing around in my brain with Reed trying to solve a decades-old mystery, but then flashing back to that old mystery and the detective who had been working on it. It’s one of my favorite Reed stories. Obviously I had to create that old detective, who is Dewey. I wanted him to be a more hard-boiled traditional detective like Sam Spade or Philip Marlowe, and yet have Dewey have a softer side that you rarely see. I liked Dewey so much I gave him his own series, and it’s been fun to chronicle his adventures.

What challenges do you face as a female author who writes male protagonists?

I think the biggest thing is that I don’t necessarily think like a man, and sometimes I make mistakes (I’ve been called out on Reed fainting versus passing out). But I have plenty of male fans, so I must be doing something right J

Authors face so many different challenges in their careers. What has been the biggest challenge you’ve had to cope with and how did you overcome that challenge?

Probably the biggest challenge is time. I still have a day job, and working all day, then writing and marketing nights and weekends can be tough. I’d say that’s something I haven’t overcome yet, but it’s still worth it to me, so I keep going J Unfortunately, there just aren’t enough hours in the day for everything. But I’ve been blessed to have writing as a side gig, and I keep working at it.

Where do you draw the inspiration for your stories from? Is there a process or does the idea simply come to you?

For the Reed Ferguson series, I look at old film noir movies and that gives me some inspiration at times. I also find a lot of ideas watching the news or true crime shows. There are so many things that happen in our world that can be turned into a story. The challenge is to tell a story in a new or different way. In the first Reed Ferguson mystery, This Doesn’t Happen In The Movies, I wanted something out of the norm, and at the time I wrote it, I’d not read any private eye novels where we encounter the hero at the beginning of his or her detecting career. So in that first book, Reed is a brand-new detective working on his very first case. My latest Reed Ferguson mystery, A Killing, revolves around a treasure hunt, which I thought was something different in a crime story. I have so many ideas for stories and not enough time to write them all.

What are the challenges of writing stories set in a modern, well known city such as Denver? By the same token, what are the advantages using a city such as Denver as the setting for stories?

It’s challenging to get settings correct, but beyond that, it’s mostly fun. I grew up in Denver, so I know the city well, and I can even flavor the stories with things a reader might not know. It’s also been fun to use Denver as a setting because of its proximity to the mountains. That gives me more setting to play with.

Your characters are interesting people. What is the process by which you craft such interesting characters for your stories?

Again, thank you. I was a counselor for several years, and I met and worked with a lot of people with varied backgrounds, and that helps me give flavor to the characters I write. I’ve also worked hard to create some characters that might be considered a bit outside the norm. So many books are being written and published these days, it’s nice to try to create characters that have a bit of flair.

What classic crime noir authors are your favorite and how have they influenced you as a storyteller?

Dashiell Hammett, Raymond Chandler, and James M. Cain are a few. Talk about a way with words! I also love the old Rex Stout Nero Wolfe series. To me, Reed is a little like Archie Goodwin. I love to study their works just to see how they describe things, how they turn a phrase that sticks with you long after you’ve put the book down.

What modern, or current day, authors do you enjoy? Are there any in particular that influence the stories you tell?

Unfortunately I don’t get to read as much these days as I’d like to, but I do enjoy Dennis Lehane, PJ Tracy, and Michael Connelly. I study them to see how the construct a story, and how they keep the tension building so that you want to keep turning pages. When I used to commute to downtown Denver, I did a lot of reading on the bus and light rail, and I used to tear through books. I read a lot of different mysteries, from cozies to things like Lee Child’s Reacher series. I have a big library of books that seem to give me inspiration.

For any aspiring author who wants to take the plunge and become a published author, what advice or encouragement can you share?

First, decide if you want to write for the sake of writing, or if you want to make this a business. If it’s the latter, it’s not usually an overnight success, and you’ll have to learn marketing as well. This is work. But you can do it. Second, keep writing, and keep reading up on the craft of writing; you’ll get better as you go. Finally, if you love to write, do it! Don’t let anyone discourage you. The advice I got a long time ago is still true now. If you wrote a thousand words a day, you’d have a book or two finished in a year. And you’ll find your audience who’ll want to devour your stories. Even though I put a lot of time into this, I wouldn’t do it if I didn’t get a kick out of creating new characters and stories every day.

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Interview With Illustrator Sadie Rose du Vigneaud

Miss du Vigneaud was the illustrator for the interior illustrations of The Girl Who Wasn’t There, Episode IV in the Capital City Character Series.

Illustrator Sadie Rose du Vigneaud

When did it begin to become obvious you had a talent for drawing?  

I have always had an interest in art and design. I think I really began improving on my skill in middle school. I dedicated a lot of my time to drawing and painting. My art teacher noticed my interest and really helped me find new ways to create.


What made you decide to become an illustrator and graphic artist?

I have always loved storytelling and art, which is what attracted me to be an illustrator. I do not like limiting myself to one thing and I felt as if I could pursue many different paths in illustration.


In bringing the three main characters in The Girl Who Wasn’t There to life, what were the biggest challenges for you?


My biggest challenge was understanding the characters and how they would react. The three are identical clones, who often have different or limited emotional responses. Understanding how they present themselves to the world in different ways was a challenge.


If you could start over again and create all new illustrations for the story, what would you do differently?


With many artists, they find that they improve as they create. Small things like shading and positioning are what I learned through this process. If I were to go back a recreate, I would add more detail to the background settings. I have always focused on characters in my work, but I have recently found an interest in backgrounds and settings.


Can you explain the process you used to visually bring to life characters that previously had only existed in written form?


My process is fairly simple. First, I sketch out many different ideas I have. Next, I would narrow down the sketches and pick out my favorites. Most importantly, I would pose myself or friends for reference so I can better understand a scene, movement, and proportions. Understanding the scene in my own eyes is what helped me visualize it best. Finally, I bring my ideas into digital form.


In the course of creating the illustrations for The Girl Who Wasn’t There, what did you learn about being an illustrator that you previously didn’t  know?

I think something I learned is working with someone else. I have worked on group projects and assigned work, but those tend to be open-ended. Working with a writer to make their story come to life is different. You have to fully understand their vision for the illustrations.


For anyone who is interested in a career in graphic design or being an illustrator, what advice can you offer?


My advice would be to experiment. Never limit yourself to one style or medium.

To check out Miss du Vigneaud’s illustrations in The Girl Who Wasn’t There, pick up a copy! Available from Amazon in Kindle or paperback editions on May 19th, 2020.

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The Thomas Sullivan Chronicles and Other Stories